Feedback for the video idea (peer assessment)

The feedback is generally positive in regards to the planning, though the goals stated are more related to my confidence in putting across my ideas (which needs working on, as at the time I was fairly flustered), which even led to me forgetting the name of the band. I have a few goals to add for the project: to finish a more comprehensive shot list and storyboard, to get some location shots, nail down actors, create a comprehensive list of equipment needed, and source whatever archival footage that might be needed.